It is said that taking risks is important, whether when you are working professionally or living with your relatives. This, in my opinion, has both advantages and drawbacks.
Here is a rule: if you don't take risks, you won't gain anything. This is because if you choose not to, you will not decide to do anything great, thus becoming just an ordinary person, with no notable achievements. Taking risks can give you a fortune: at work, you can take risk by accepting a bigger assignment from your boss or conduct a bigger, more expensive project to earn more and get promotions. When living your personal life, you may play games like rollercoasters to get a new experience. If you think you can, you may even register for military services and then get credited for your bravery, or even die for your fatherland.
However, the higher the risk you take is, the more it gives or costs. You may have to lose your current, probably important, relationships in order to focus entirely on your work. Trying out new recreations can cost lots of money, and in some cases, illegal. Your health, or even your life, can be put on the line if you opt for something dangerous such as hunting crocodiles or racing. Thus, unless you are sure you have nothing to lose, think again before doing such things.
To sum up, taking risks is very important to a successful life. However, how big a risk is acceptable depends on what you currently have at your disposal - money, friends and lovers, maybe even your job and career, that you are willing to spend all.
It is said that taking risks is important, whether when you are working professionally or living with your relatives. This, in my opinion, has both advantages and drawbacks.
Here is a rule: if you don't take risks, you won't gain anything. This is because if you choose not to, you will not decide to do anything great, thus becoming just an ordinary person, with no notable achievements. Taking risks can give you a fortune: at work, you can take risk by accepting a bigger assignment from your boss or conduct a bigger, more expensive project to earn more and get promotions. When living your personal life, you may play games like rollercoasters to get a new experience. If you think you can, you may even register for military services and then get credited for your bravery, or even die for your fatherland.
However, the higher the risk you take is, the more it gives or costs. You may have to lose your current, probably important, relationships in order to focus entirely on your work. Trying out new recreations can cost lots of money, and in some cases, illegal. Your health, or even your life, can be put on the line if you opt for something dangerous such as hunting crocodiles or racing. Thus, unless you are sure you have nothing to lose, think again before doing such things.
To sum up, taking risks is very important to a successful life. However, how big a risk is acceptable depends on what you currently have at your disposal - money, friends and lovers, maybe even your job and career, that you are willing to spend all of.
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- It is said that taking risks is important whether when you are working professionally or living with your relatives This in my opinion has both advantages and drawbacks Here is a rule if you don t take risks you won t gain anything This is because if you 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and drawbacks. Here is a rule: if you dont take risks, you wont gain anything. Thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, then, thus, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6496350365 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56394324404 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7090895072 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.557274266418 0.244688304435 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213299586093 0.084324248473 253% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114623009994 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394049437214 0.151304729494 260% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149632646349 0.056905535591 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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