Dear Amin,
I hope you are doing well,
As you may know, Toronto Music Festivals will be held from 11 to 22 April. I'm writing this letter to kindly invite you to come over to Toronto and join me to enjoy the spectacular concert events planed to be held.
Let me explain in more detail about the event. The festival is coming back to Toronto after four years, and the good news is that many top musical bands and singers, such as Maroon 5, Adele, Rihanna, etc, are going to perform. Besides, there would be lots of street performances by great popular artists. However, we need to make a plan and buy our tickets in advance as it's expected that thousands of people will come to attend it this year.
Hopefully, in April the weather would become warmer, thus, after the festival finishes, we can enjoy the spring weather by going to beautiful nearby outdoor places for a picnic or camping if you like.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you,
Your friend,
Masoud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57471264368 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19127613697 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6333225737 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151627857474 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674588035821 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645199262156 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511969539447 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302022268318 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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