Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
I prefer to eat my meals at home because I would have the opportunity to spend more time with my family. Moreover, I believe it is much healthier than restaurant foods. I will illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First, my eating meals at home you can spend more time with your family. As a result, it could help to make relationships stronger. Indeed, today, people are very busy because people are struggling with making money. Thus, they have little time to be with their families. If people don’t try to allocate more time to their family, their relationships would become destroyed little by little. Therefore, eating at home is one of the best chances to spend more time with them. For example, I have a friend who loved his family very much. Last year, He fired his previous job and started a new job himself. He worked until midnight to become successful and make money. Therefore, he doesn’t see his wife and children except when they are at sleep. Thereby, because of this, their relationship became cold as far as someday his wife asked him to divorce.
Second, restaurant foods aren’t healthy at all. Although all restaurants must have some health certificates, you cannot be sure that what happens in their kitchen. On the contrary, when you are cooking at home you decide about the quality of raw materials and the way you want to cook them. Moreover, today, people mostly eat junk food at restaurants which is not healthy at all. Junk foods have a lot of fat, sugar, salt and other things that will gradually affect people’s health. For example, when I was a student at university, I used to eat at restaurants. I mostly chose fast food because I’m a fan of pizza and hotdog. Although it was very delicious, after a year I added a weight of about 9 kg. Moreover, when someday I became sick and my friends took me to the hospital. The Doctor said to me I got hypertension which was probably because of consuming a lot of salt and oil.
Based on the aforementioned reasons, it can be concluded that eating meals at home instead of restaurants would be a better choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...d to eat at restaurants. I mostly chose fast food because I'm a fan of pizza an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72043010753 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69939993889 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6749318901 48.9658058833 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.24 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.88 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267030115785 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709486111991 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698050933195 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163680122069 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359388352599 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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