The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that increasing the driving age is the best way to raise road safety. This problem has been a controversial topic of debate for a long time. I strongly agree with increasing the minimum legal age for drivers and I will explain both views below.
On the one hand, I believe that the legal age relates to drivers' awareness. Olders drivers have much experience in driving so they can easily solve serious traffic cases. While most youngsters are careless driving when they use traffic transport. Furthermore, young people often pass away from serious consequences of traffic accidents. Besides, it is not justice when young drivers cause accidents but they do not have to be responsible for serious crashes. On top of that, drivers who are not mature enough to drive, have bad driving habits and are more hungry for success, which makes it easy for them to cause accidents.
On the other hand, raising the minimum legal age has some disadvantages so the government should have another method to reduce traffic crimes. The most popular way for younger people to commute is self driving. For illustration, nearly 90% of students in Vietnam use motorbikes in traffic and most of them do not have enough to use transport. To solve this problem, the government should enact more severe punishment to reduce traffic accidents. The driving test should be raised the level of difficulty to prevent people who do not have enough ability to drive from using private vehicles or motorbikes. Thus, infrastructure should be invested for youngsters and decrease the amount of drivers.
In conclusion, raising the driving age to make a safer road is outweighing the other part of the topic. Although it has some drawbacks, it is the best way to decline traffic crimes and accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can easily solve serious traffic cases. While most youngsters are careless driving wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64596903088 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515050167224 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9924223485 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.9411764706 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11103706095 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394578134928 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034437674471 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772671789855 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100421587258 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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