Describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt. Explain your choice, using specific reasons and examples.
Every country has their own customs that are expected to be followed by all members of society. There are many customs in my country that I wish were also followed elsewhere, one of which is children living with their parents until they are capable of earning. This may sound strange to others but is considered a norm in our culture.
In many parts of the world, as soon as children turn eighteen, they want to leave their parents and start living on their own. Of course, this helps them be independant, but it also hurts their future. They may not be able to focus on their studies and pursue the career of their dreams, instead they are forced to do odd, low-paying jobs in order to survive and if they do manage to complete their studies, they end up knee-deep in debts.
In our country, however, children remain with their parents until they can earn enough to survive on their own. This means that students can focus on their studies and career rather than having to worry about survival.This way we do not have to fret over paying for utilities, food and other necessities. If parents are able to, they may even pay their children’s tuition fees. This means we do better in universities and secure high-paying jobs earlier than most people.
Another benefit of this arrangement is the support we receive. The earliest years of adulthood are the most challenging and it is always a comfort to know that you have a family that will stick with you through thick and thin. They do not only help us financially but also morally. This does not mean that we take unfair advantage of our parents. Once we are able to live independently, it is expected that we help them in any way we can, whether it be financially or assisting them when they are ill, making sure that we respect them at all times. After all that they do for us, this is the least we can do for them
To sum up, I believe that people all around the world should remain with their parents until they are able to earn enough to live independently. This will save them from giving up their dreams as well as many years of debt. It would also help them through the transformation from childhood to adulthood, which is a vulnerable time for many.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...her than having to worry about survival.This way we do not have to fret over paying ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, after all, of course, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5536159601 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42094167136 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493765586035 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1232153191 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0560601075364 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240144841692 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329371440744 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045135631247 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458480622556 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...her than having to worry about survival.This way we do not have to fret over paying ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, after all, of course, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5536159601 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42094167136 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493765586035 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1232153191 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0560601075364 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240144841692 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329371440744 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045135631247 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458480622556 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.