A foreign visitor has to spend only one day in your country Where should that visitor go on that day Why Use specific reason and details to support your choice
A foreigner would wish to visit all the highly promoted tourist destinations in a country, but as many of these spots can be found elsewhere, such as theme parks or malls, it may not be worth visiting such places. I believe that visitors should always explore places that represent the culture and history of a particular country. So instead of recommending common tourist attractions, I would suggest tourists to visit the heart of the city of Jeddah, Al-Balad.
Balad happens to be the oldest part of the city and has been overlooked until very recently, since the government has decided to preserve its history. It is the path that pilgrims took on their journey to Makkah in the olden days. This site is also a World Heritage site making it worth a visit.
Visiting Balad is like stepping inside a time portal. People can view the restored buildings with their intricate lattice windows and walls inscribed with calligraphy. Some of the houses have been turned into museums so that visitors can see how people lived in this region in the past. You can also buy souvenirs here which are unlike what you have seen before.
If people are worried about the scorching heat which Saudi Arabia is notorious for, they should fear not as air conditioners are functional indoors at all times and care is taken to reduce the impact of the weather. Nonetheless, the best time to visit here is a few hours before sunset when the city comes alive and it is cool enough to wander outside. This is the best time to observe the daily lives of the locals as well.
Besides the beautiful architecture and rich history, this is the best location to find the most authentic and delicious local food. Saudi cuisine is known as one of the best in the world, so I would urge all tourists to at least try it once. They can have a chance to dine with locals and visit local style and quirky cafes and restaurants. You will find universal favorites, such as Falafel and Tabbouleh, as well as lesser known underrated meals as well.
To sum up, Balad would be my first choice when recommending a destination to a foreigner because it is a World Heritage site and for good reasons too. It is brimming with art and history which is almost non-existent in touristy spots. Visitors can have a chance to visit museums, observe the everyday lives of locals and enjoy one of the best cuisines in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...s and walls inscribed with calligraphy. Some of the houses have been turned into museums so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, then, well, at least, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67298578199 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4753813563 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537914691943 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2770623388 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596611286102 0.236089414692 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180713915299 0.076458572812 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302410455152 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322679531385 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318033134126 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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