here are doubts about whether some paintings are painted by him, a representation of these paintings is: Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a white Bonnet.
Rembrandt is one of the famous painters in seventeenth-century in Netherlands. Recently, there are doubts about whether some paintings are painted by him, a representation of these paintings is: Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a white Bonnet. However, a lecture argues this idea by giving brief explainations to the suggested problems.
At the beginning, lecture asserts that the inconsistent about woman’s clothes is not directly caused by the creater. The passage thinks the white linen cap is what only servants wear and the coat she wears cannot be afford by servants, and this coincident is not likely to be appeared in Rembrandt’s paintins. The lecture contradicts this idea by arguring that the colors and pigments are not originally painted by Rembrandt, this unsuitable pigments are painted after hundreds of years later by a man who wanted to make the painting seems more profitable. So the painting is very likely to be colored again in later centuries.
Second, due to the re-paint, Rembrandt’s genre is shielded in this painting. The passage mentioned Rembrandt is the master of light and shadow, but in this painting these elements are not fixed well together. However, lecture answered that in the original painting, woman wears simple lightment color cloth, which is outlined in the painting and brings realistic feeling to appreciators.
Lastly, Rembrandt did actually painted on a wood panel that are glued with several pieces of wood. the lecture said this painting was designed to be patchwork that is different from other works created by Rembrandt,. This kind of composition, however, can add more details and authenticity to the painting. Moreover, the material to create the wood panel for this painting is as the same as the wood material for other panels used by Rembrandt. Therefore, wood panel of this painting is actually selected and made by Rembrandt himself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: paint
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: , .
...nt from other works created by Rembrandt,. This kind of composition, however, can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 30.3222958057 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1373.03311258 117% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94003608974 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8050088504 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.8 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06452816374 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366987336242 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135526536116 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.206748531355 0.0662205650399 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271427869225 0.162205337803 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181635956217 0.0443174109184 410% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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