These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. Do you agree or disagree?
It is hard to ignore the statement that people are overloaded with commercial.
Nowdays, companies spend astronomical marketing budgets to reach potential customers, willing to win a race of a tough competitiveness
and get an edge in product and service promotion.
It would be easier to illustrate this fact if we go through a daily routine of avreage megapolis dweller.
You start facing an annoying advertisement, approaching to subway station where some disguised guy trying to hand you over vivid flyers.
At last you crash on your office chair and start looking through email box trying to pull out something meaningful from the plethora of income letters which full of spam.
More over, the quantity of calls you get during the day corresponds with a profusion of questionnaires you fill out willing to catch desired discounts.
This sort of torture would continue if you decided to get some fresh air during an afternoon break and surf Google`s pages. Google`s business so well-entrenched
that you have got to pay for advertisment not getting on your nerves.
At the end of the day you become an ordinary spectator of colorful commercial abundance as a part of a night streets decoration.
In attempts to wash away tension accumulated through the day people heading to parks. But this opportunity to receive a portion of relaxation won`t last.
As a matter of fact, a law allowing to install billboard in parks passed legislation in Miami, depriving citizens of one more option to get rid of overwhelming amount of reclame.
So obvious examples of bombarding consumers with arritating advertisment from companies confirm the statement of excessive appearance of commercial in daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 12, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'streets'' or 'street's'?
Suggestion: streets'; street's
...mmercial abundance as a part of a night streets decoration. In attempts to wash away t...
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Line 14, column 37, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'installing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: installing
...t. As a matter of fact, a law allowing to install billboard in parks passed legislation i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, sort of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27173913043 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09959268215 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6321874826 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232211343826 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697054607549 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050258572465 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719499631584 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487053975979 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.