write an essay about the L'oreal hair dye color advertisement.
Colorista from L'Oréal Paris delivers semi-permanent hair color in a range of trendy, bold shades. It does not matter if the user base color is ultra-light or a deep dark hue, they have tints for anyone. The personality of a person may be determined by their hair color. L’oreal has produced various effective commercials that bring up a positive, upbeat, proactive, and tailored feeling to their target customers. This is one of their advertisements named Colorista semi-permanent hair color for light blonde highlighted hair by L’oreal 2017. The advertisement for Colorista from L’Oreal’s hair dye color makes its target audience interested through its included text, content, and lighting.
The advertisement features a full-page photo of three girls with different hair colors on the left side and product information on the right side, which was designed with a ratio of one over one. The details were divided into two parts, left and right. On the left side, they put three portraits of three girls with long, thick, and bright-colored hair. These girls look cool with model faces. Two of them touch their hair like they are proud of it. In their portrait, the company used white as a background and let the model wear white and black shirts only, to highlight the model's hair color. On the right side is information about the product and the user manual. They use black text and white background to let the buyer easily read the slogan “color your way!” and “because you are worth it”. There is a picture of seven bottles of products in seven different colors. These images and text make up the Colorista ad.
The Colorista ad seems to target young women and girls, aged from 15 to 30. Who are still at the age that loves to enjoy their life, and do not scare to try any new thing! Since is a well-known brand available at many stores like Walmart, Target, Ulta, and almost every market, the ad is geared toward people of young females. They want to afford to purchase name-brand hair dye colors at a reasonable price. Although anyone can enjoy dyeing hair, the ad seems to target females, as only three women are shown. This observation is reinforced by the ad’s placement on Instagram. The ad’s style and images further imply that it is geared toward women who want to get a new look, by the way, they used a portrait of a young pretty model, any woman wants to look pretty and luxurious as a model. The ad, overall, seeks to target a specified range of women to provide them with an exciting experience with dying hair color.
Specifically, the ad seeks to make its target audience feel interested. The word “interesting” is defined by the Oxford English Dictionary as “That concerns, touches, affects, or is of importance; important.” Being interested in something is like a baby when she first saw her mom's makeup stuff. She was attracted to the colors of eyeshadow and lipstick. She tried to put all the makeup on her face. An Example of an interesting character is Leonardo da Vinci. He is aware of almost all majors, from literature and art to social sciences. That makes people feel interested in him. They always wonder how he can be that smart. People want to know more about him. He is always an interesting topic to talk about. Interesting is completely the opposite feeling of boredom. If the ad is boring, no one will look at it. No one will want to try the product or want to know more about the item. As a company, making an interesting ad is one of its big goals. Because if the customer feels interested when they see the ad, that means they already love it so much. They are excited to know more about it and want to try the product as soon as possible. Colorista attempts to evoke an interesting feeling through its ad.
First, the ad makes the target audience feel interested through its text. The slogan “color your way!” bring the emotion of personal specific. Everybody has a different character and different style. “Color your way!” is like a cheer to customers to be who they are by the way they chose their hair favorite color. “Color your way” is also an active statement. The guests have the initiative to choose what they want. The other slogan “Because you are worth it” tells that the customer can treat themselves by changing their hair color to get a new look. “Because you are worth it” is also a compliment and encouragement. This brought a feeling of happiness and positivity to the customer. The two slogans are short but have a positive impact. The ad succeeded in making the reader feel interested through its text.
Second, the ad makes the target audience feel interested through its content. Three pictures of young women models gave the ad much attention. Because humans love to look at pretty things. Using pictures of cute girls made the viewer take more time to look at the ad. This can make the customer excited about using this product. Because most woman always thinks that someone used this product and it brings that person a good look, it also means they will too. When they see these pictures, they think these models used Colorista to dye their hair, and that made the model prettier. They think that if they use this product to dye their hair, they will be prettier too. The ad succeeded in making the reader feel interested through its content.
Third, the ad makes the target audience feel interested through its lighting. They used white for the background, black for the text, and rainbow for the hair color. This makes the hair color highlight on a white background. The customer can see more clearly the product result in the model’s hair. Using white for the background is a safe and smart choice. Because white can go with any color and readers are not confused by colors. The ad had three girls with three different hair colors, which gave the customer more options and showed the variety of colors that the brand has. The ad uses bright colors to bring a feeling of comfort, joy, and positivity. The ad succeeded in making the reader feel interested through its lighting.
After being analyzed we can agree that the ad is already a success because it makes people feel interested while reading it. The ad brought emotion that made the reader want to buy the item. The advertisement for Colorista from L’Oreal’s hair dye color interests its target audience through its included text, picture, and lighting
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ages and text make up the Colorista ad. The Colorista ad seems to target young w...
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...eader feel interested through its text. Second, the ad makes the target audience...
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...omen models gave the ad much attention. Because humans love to look at pretty things. U...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, still, third, well, while, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 15.1003584229 272% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 104.0 43.0788530466 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 132.0 52.1666666667 253% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5331.0 1977.66487455 270% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 1115.0 407.700716846 273% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78116591928 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.77854788975 4.48103885553 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54095865219 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 421.0 212.727598566 198% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.377578475336 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1612.8 618.680645161 261% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 26.0 9.59856630824 271% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 28.0 3.08781362007 907% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 11.0 3.51792114695 313% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 72.0 20.6003584229 350% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6290242678 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0416666667 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4861111111 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13888888889 5.45110844103 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 53.0 11.8709677419 446% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215234533356 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503552192066 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061664402531 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128316916758 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585335695009 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 184.0 86.8835125448 212% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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