It is true that consumers prefer buying imported products to domestic ones. This essay will mention several reasons leading to this phenomenon and some remedies to boost people to purchase products produced in their country.
Nowadays, people have a tendency towards buying goods from other countries due to some factors. Firstly, consumers may feel tedious with locally produced foods many times before; therefore, imported products can be regarded as principal choices for people to not only vary their daily meals but also satisfy their excitement to try delicacies from various parts of the world. Secondly, alluring advertising and appetizing appearance of imported foods also contribute to this situation. For example, with one bag of light red Vietnam apples and one bag of bright red ones from America, clients may tend to choose to purchase the latter.
However, several ways should be confronted to encourage consumers to buy domestic commodities. The first action is that manufacturing corporations should improve food’s quality and their images and packaging. For instance, these companies can organize marketing campaigns to present their products via means of communication such as social networking sites, television, radio and newspapers. Furthermore, experts and doctors should inform customers about some negative effects of imported foods for clients’ health. Because these foods contain a lot of additives and especially artificial preservatives to keep fresh after long-distance haulage from country to country.
In conclusion, while there are many reasons why clients choose to purchase products manufactured from other nations, some measures can be implemented to deal with this phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73046875 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82831652925 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4824706185 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271021061902 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958560405149 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531399900973 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146829896392 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629877511948 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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