The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now and plans for its development Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The maps below show the center of a small town called Birshire as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by 111 on Tue, 03/21/2023 - 09:23

The maps given depicts the layout of the center of a small town called Birshire currently and the conception for the future development.
It is clear from the pictures that the town will have undergone some noticeable transformations. Additionally, more houses will have been constructed.
Today, at the bottom of the first map, there is the public park flanked by an Open field to the right and McGoldrick Road to the left. Conversely, Hoolahan Farm is located next to the road. Likewise, Corbie Road is between Griffiths Farm and Farmer’s Market in the top area, whereas shops are opposite to the Public Park and beside a small road leading to a tenant of houses.
In the future, a Roundabout will have been built at the intersection of That Street and McGolden Road, while more houses are predicted to have been substituded for the shops and Griffith Farm will have been knocked down to give way to a Supermarket. By contrast, there will have been the disappearance of Farmer’s Market and a Car Park and Sports Center are projected to have been erected at the locations where Hoolahan Farm and Open field used to be in that order. Besides, the Public Park will have remained unchanged.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...here will have been the disappearance of Farmer’s Market and a Car Park and Sport...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, first, if, likewise, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84390243902 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73031323313 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517073170732 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9237680144 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835574147122 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432152422887 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734444978998 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818501021687 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952923972715 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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