The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the current layout and proposed alterations to a town named Islip.
Overall, the town will experience a radical change with the erection of the dual carriageway encircling most of the settlement. It is also pronounced that the town will become more inhabited and various amenities will be provided.
At present, the long main road running from west to east divides the town intro two parts with two rows of shops on both sides. The northern land of the town is undeveloped while the southern land is the residential area. There are two subsidiary roads to the west and east of the main road, going southwards to the school and the park respectively.
The planned scheme shows radical changes to Islip. The new carriageway will be constructed, enclosing most of the area, except for the school about to be widened and one housing estate. The access to the present main road will be denied; instead, it is exclusively devoted to walkers. In the north, the chain of shops will be replaced by the cluster of community facilities with the big bus station, shopping center and car park. Adjacent to those facilities will be new residences; there will also be a new neighborhood to the southeast of the town, with the park made smaller later for its space. The houses located on the south will be shifted further southwest. The southern line of stores will be unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t to be widened and one housing estate. The access to the present main road will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83682008368 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63684650805 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548117154812 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.27340383 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10417139937 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446572580627 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417236552303 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702304451635 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273483361785 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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