Task 1: The maps below show the center of a small town called Berkshire as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate a minor central region of Berkshire, including its current and potential plans regarding development. Overall, the number of houses and roadways are expected to increase along with replacement of certain amenities existing currently.
Towards the east of McGoldrick road, the major changes will include replacement of shops in south-east with construction of more quantity of houses, along with two roads and a roundabout, that is to be build surrounding these houses. The proportion of houses will double by future. Additionally, the Farmer’s market and Griffiths farms around Corbie Road in the north will be demolished, and in exchange a supermarket will be constructed at the western corner of this road. Moreover, in place of Hoolahan farms between That street and McGoldrick road, a car park adjoining these roads will be created. Consequently, a sports center will be made in the open field area. However, all the current roads and streets, the public park, and the tree around it will remain unaltered.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 734, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding tree'?
Suggestion: the surrounding tree
...roads and streets, the public park, and the tree around it will remain unaltered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34146341463 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92540615809 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.179541796 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0201801311958 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0120872174371 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218554931064 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246822309161 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175194379903 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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