The given map demonstrates the alternations made in one territory from 1995 till now. Overall, what stands out from the map is that during that time, the areal witnessed dramatic changes with the addition of some buildings.
A more detailed look at the maps reveals that the most striking changes can be in the recreational facilities. changed, restaurant and apartments have been built instead of shop and fish market. So another noticeable change has been done, fishing port has been demolished. In addition, car park has been developed to the right of hotel for being comfortable to people stayed there. More importantly, housing has been expanded. The only thing remained untouched has been the east part of the island with cafe.Kechagina oqshomlari oy to'lib nur sochar edi g'inhcalarga noming aytsam qizil yuzin ochar edii.Sen olisda men olissda begonamiz endi yor.Armonlarga do;srt tutingan devonmaix endi yot. Suv bo'yiga borar bi'lsam soch tarashlar yo'q endi.Men seni sevar edim...
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present 40
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present 78
- The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for change to the school site in 2024 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present 78
- The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for change to the school site in 2024 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Changed
... can be in the recreational facilities. changed, restaurant and apartments have been bu...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kechagina
...n the east part of the island with cafe.Kechagina oqshomlari oy tolib nur sochar edi ginh...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sen
...ga noming aytsam qizil yuzin ochar edii.Sen olisda men olissda begonamiz endi yor.A...
^^^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Armonlarga
...n olisda men olissda begonamiz endi yor.Armonlarga do;srt tutingan devonmaix endi yot. Suv...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Men
...ga borar bilsam soch tarashlar yoq endi.Men seni sevar edim...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77578166281 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.775641025641 0.547539520022 142% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1130621988 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683194600956 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283650632812 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369658107816 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650241956706 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354228697947 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Changed
... can be in the recreational facilities. changed, restaurant and apartments have been bu...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kechagina
...n the east part of the island with cafe.Kechagina oqshomlari oy tolib nur sochar edi ginh...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sen
...ga noming aytsam qizil yuzin ochar edii.Sen olisda men olissda begonamiz endi yor.A...
^^^
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Armonlarga
...n olisda men olissda begonamiz endi yor.Armonlarga do;srt tutingan devonmaix endi yot. Suv...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Men
...ga borar bilsam soch tarashlar yoq endi.Men seni sevar edim...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34615384615 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77578166281 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.775641025641 0.547539520022 142% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1130621988 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0683194600956 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283650632812 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369658107816 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650241956706 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354228697947 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.