Some Universities in less developed countries hire professors from well-known universities to improve the quality of education. Some believe that this is not a perfect solution and there are other ways to enhance the quality of education. DO you agree or disagree?
Problematic of education is one of the biggest problem for undeveloping countries. Many colleges consider to recruit professor from accredited colleges for reform education system, while others oppose this because any another methods to invent higher education. I completely disagree with this notion and think it is true if some country should be prepare with education transformation through another way.
First of all, spend a lot of money for supply viability of educator. In other words, when some universities decided to got professor from classy university they must provide everything lecturer need such as accommodation, provision, and salary. Moreover, spare money for this option can not guarantee progress to encourage critical thinking in students as a result if this method failed, all of money that was issued will be vain. For example, every years several of company that established cooperation with among of universities in abroad, and one of the project it is to inviting the lecturer from that universities to giving some education based on education system in oversea and event organizer must spend money at least 100 million ruphias to one tutor and as a result no all audience that attended in it event can be success in the future or qualify for study abroad. Thats why government, representative of some company even colleges should have effective strategic to increasing education quality and don't wast a lot of money for uncertainties conditions.
Secondly, improving education by creating high quality of human resources. Great education will be able to yield many juvenile with intelligence that can make development in some nation, for finding people with this criteria government should be provide schoolarship for smart students. In other words, sending representative of students to study abroad will be solution of each problem that country have, because all of students will absorb all science from professor in famous universities and will apply it in Indonesia. For example, LPDP is one of the best schoolarship in Indonesia every 6 months they will open enrollment to look at the best person to study abroad and this organization will give money for life, intuition, insurance and etc and one of the best proviso is each students must br back after the study and making a project for improve Indonesia. Thus, every years student will back and starting to making transformation.
To conclude, the best way to improving quality of education by sending students to study abroad and as a result will generate many quality human resources.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider recruiting'.
Suggestion: consider recruiting
...r undeveloping countries. Many colleges consider to recruit professor from accredited colleges for ...
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Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prepared'?
Suggestion: prepared
...nk it is true if some country should be prepare with education transformation through a...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 776, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...on ruphias to one tutor and as a result no all audience that attended in it event ...
^^
Line 2, column 876, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...the future or qualify for study abroad. Thats why government, representative of some ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1011, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gic to increasing education quality and dont wast a lot of money for uncertainties c...
^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
Suggestion: provided
...with this criteria government should be provide schoolarship for smart students. In oth...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ject for improve Indonesia. Thus, every years student will back and starting to makin...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, at least, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89487717951 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.224343121 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246543746031 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994274426644 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640976067859 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175904239034 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240808276331 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider recruiting'.
Suggestion: consider recruiting
...r undeveloping countries. Many colleges consider to recruit professor from accredited colleges for ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'prepared'?
Suggestion: prepared
...nk it is true if some country should be prepare with education transformation through a...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 776, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...on ruphias to one tutor and as a result no all audience that attended in it event ...
^^
Line 2, column 876, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...the future or qualify for study abroad. Thats why government, representative of some ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1011, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...gic to increasing education quality and dont wast a lot of money for uncertainties c...
^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provided'?
Suggestion: provided
...with this criteria government should be provide schoolarship for smart students. In oth...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ject for improve Indonesia. Thus, every years student will back and starting to makin...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, at least, for example, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.3376753507 288% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25242718447 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89487717951 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.224343121 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.571428571 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246543746031 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994274426644 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640976067859 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175904239034 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240808276331 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.