The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership plays a major role for developing sectors in government, industry and many others. Society has the responsibility to cherish young people to take the worthy role of leadeship. For this, the young people must inherit the sense of cooperation rather than competition.
First of all, a society must prepare young minds to take part actively in social activities. For example, young people should come forward to engage in times of distress like flood or natural calamities. They should be aware cooperation should be promoted as best as possible. Since the inception of earth, peace and prosperity is achieved through cooperation. Any branches of knowledge is developed through cooperation.
Secondly, young people in industry or other people must seek for leadership. For instance, young people in industry should come forward to seek innovation. Many companies like apple, samsung and many other tech -giant companies in moder world seek for cooperation and collaboration rather than competition in order to improve their products. Only coopeartion can lead to success.
However I do concede that competetion is also needed in the field. How can one raise his or her standard if one can not be compared? by competiting with others, one can realise his or her mistakes. One can argue and mental peace can be hampered form comperation. Thus, young people may knowingly or unknowingly be a part of rat-race. But, a sense of competition must be limited to a certain extent.
In conclusion, the best way for a society to prepare young minds is to install them a sense of coperation from their early ages. Young minds should engage in any activity and learn leadership to develop the society. Thus, young people will bring ray of hopes in the darkest portion of society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... possible. Since the inception of earth, peace and prosperity is achieved through...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... cooperation. Any branches of knowledge is developed through cooperation. Secon...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly coopeartion can lead to success. However I do concede that competetion is also n...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...er standard if one can not be compared? by competiting with others, one can realis...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: W
...pes in the darkest portion of society. w
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13356164384 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83053901519 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4803828083 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.380952381 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391410436458 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10751994737 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103095061184 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220279424452 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942942658783 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... possible. Since the inception of earth, peace and prosperity is achieved through...
^^
Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... cooperation. Any branches of knowledge is developed through cooperation. Secon...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly coopeartion can lead to success. However I do concede that competetion is also n...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...er standard if one can not be compared? by competiting with others, one can realis...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: W
...pes in the darkest portion of society. w
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13356164384 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83053901519 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4803828083 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.380952381 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.61904761905 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391410436458 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10751994737 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103095061184 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220279424452 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942942658783 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.