Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects like philosophy and history, and only offer practical courses that maximize chances of employment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that universities should only provide practical majors to enhance employability instead of teaching arts subjects due to the increasing tuition and limited graduate job opportunities. In my opinion, social and cultural courses have a vital role in both society and individuals; hence, they cannot be eliminated.
First, it is advisable that artistic subjects such as history, music and drawing are taught in college because of their contribution to society. To be more precise, knowledge of culture and history provides learners with practical understanding which is useful in a range of careers as much as science, medicine, and business subjects. For example, by studying history, people have chances to gain in-depth knowledge about aspects such as culture, warfare, and economy in the past, which is a foundation for future innovation. Besides, philosophy is considered as a foundation of all basic knowledge and can help generate crucial ideas. Many great people such as the ancient Greek mathematician, physicist Aristotle, Plato and Pythagoras who set a foundation for human knowledge were also philosophers.
The second opinion I would like to mention is that the humanities can help develop critical thinking. To be more specific, studying these subjects can make students become active thinkers who are able to analyze problems, evaluate different options and make reasoned decision. These skills are transferable to many different careers. Also, loving emotions can be enhanced, which are beneficial for the mental well-being of an individual. For instance, researching works of music or writing can nurture sympathy, understanding and sharing emotions. Therefore, alongside science, medicine, and business, the role of humanity subjects is also undeniable.
In conclusion, while some people believe that science, medicine, and business subjects should be taught in universities, I am strongly convinced that artistic courses are also essential because of their significant influence on both individuals and society, and that educational institutions should broaden the accessibility of these arts majors towards students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06817713594 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596875 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3056084464 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190873715855 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555674057345 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669540821466 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120538350364 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704419967513 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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