The chart illustrates the percentage of women giving birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006.
Overall it can be seen that the percentage of women aged under 30 giving their first child dropped, while those aged over 30 saw a climb. In addition, the 30-to-34-year-olds made up the largest percentage of women giving birth to their first child.
Turning to the chart for more details, the people falling into the 19-to-24 age group accounted for 62% of the total number of first-time mothers, compared to 36% and 34% of those aged 25-to-30 and under 19 respectively in 1966. In the next 40 years, the 19-24 aged saw a dramatic fall to about 28% in its proportion of first-time mothers, while those aged 25-30 increased enormously to 50% before declining suddenly to 38% in 2006. Likewise the percentage of women aged under 19 giving birth to their first child witnessed a significant decrease to nearly 12% in 2006.
Regarding the other age group, In 1966 to people aged 30-34 made up 13%, in comparison with 8% and 3% those aged 34 to 39 in over 40 respectively. In the following 40 years, there were dramatical growth to nearly 45% and 30% in the percentage of first-time mothers aged 30-34 and 34-39 respectively. Likewise, the over-14-year-old peoples increased slightly to nearly 5% in 2006 after falling suddenly to about 2% in 1986.
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- More people put their personal information online e q address telephone number for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes is this positive or negative development 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, likewise, regarding, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80686695279 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81698116046 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497854077253 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3618854311 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333263705414 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193020176594 0.103423049105 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138670293094 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289262672585 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14671501908 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.