The approach of dealing wth bad situations in life like shortcoming money or an unpleasant job is different in people. Some believe that is better to adopt with our situations, eventhough how much unfavorable they are. Although the other approach is making things better by attempt. I will explain this arguments and my view further.
A group of individuals claim that bad conditions or happenings are the inseparable parts of life. For this, they often accept these conditions, generally due to their belief in fate. They are basically satisfied by ordinary things like low income or undesire positions. Thus, they do not make more effort to improve. Consequently, they cope with their usual achievements.
The opposite attitude to handle bad situations is to ameliorate them by endeavor. People who have this opinion usually do their maximum effort due to their extreme tendency to improve their lives. To exemplify, the possibility of quitting from an unsatisfactory job by this group because of the bad atmosphere or insufficient income is high. That is why they want to make their own desire life by themselves, not by destiny. So they commonly succeed in their job or generally in life.
From where I'm standing, the second approach is more logical. The more efforts people do, the better results they will achieve. Obviously, there are many unpleasant realities which are beyond our power, so we have to accept, but for those which are in our control, I prefer to try hard and change it in a better way.
To conclude, if we look at the most richest and the most successful people, we clearly realize that they never accept unwanted circumstances as well as they do their best to achieve what they really worth.
- There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food Yet this is necessary if we are to meet the demands of an increasing world population 71
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...enthough how much unfavorable they are. Although the other approach is making things bet...
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Suggestion: these
...hings better by attempt. I will explain this arguments and my view further. A gr...
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...job or generally in life. From where Im standing, the second approach is more l...
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Suggestion: richest
... way. To conclude, if we look at the most richest and the most successful people, we clea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, look, really, second, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98269896194 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75748371357 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2006158831 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176409867018 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525590297664 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540416252527 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963213471914 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067131150841 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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