is better for the students to live away from the home during their
university studies rather than staying with their parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Owing the importance of higher studies in both students and their parents lives, some people opine that youngsters ought to study in hostels or apart from homes during higher education, whilw other believe that students should stay with their familes. As far as I am concerned, althought living apart from families help students become independent, Staying with parents encourges them to grow in better enviroment and with parents support, they could focus more on studies.
To begin with, in this advanced era it is extremely crutial for youngsters to be in supervision of their parents as their peer could spoil them if they stay away from home. To eleborate, students who live in hostels or rented apartments could be detrimental for them if their roommates are involved in deleterious activities like smoking, taking drugs and night clubs parties. For instance, in times newspapers article published that most cocaine consumers arrested are university students. So this is clearly seen that by knowing the concequences of living aparts, youngsters could be more safer and could grow in a healthy family enviroment.
Furthermore, staying with parents is more economical as well as students could be able to focus in studies in healthy manner. To eleborate, if university students live in hostels or sperate appartment, they are required to pay high rents and ought to fullfill other utilities like electricity bills, water supply bills and grocery as well which could be highly expensive comparing living together sharing all utilities under one roof. Secondly youngsters if live away, house chores need to be done all by them without any assisstance but with family they could find supports in doing daily works.
On the other hand, there could be a benefit of living away as this would help students live independently and help them in socialisation which could be useful in their career.
In conclusion, living with family could be beneficial for both parents and students as parents would be acknowledged about their children activities as well as economically it is cheaper while on the other side students could get benefit in house chore
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 451, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent and with parents support, they could focus more on studies. To begin with,...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...s of living aparts, youngsters could be more safer and could grow in a healthy family envi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69257627014 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8042892107 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.727272727 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6363636364 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254682013171 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119230724214 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680445698443 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162302557773 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610181378547 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.