The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
In the letter to the editor of the Balmer island concludes that to reduce the number of annual accidents due to moped, the number of rental should be reduce by half during the summer season. To arrive at such a conclusion the letter mention that the neighboring island of Seaville were able to reduce the accident by limiting the rentals, so the letter suggest that the town council of Balmer island should also do the same. The argument rest on series of assumptions which are unpersuasive and logically incorrect. Let me put fort few key factors to prove it.
Firstly, the letter claims that by reducing the rental of mopeds from 50 to 25 per day the accidents would also reduce. It could also happen that the accidents due to mopeds are cause by the mopeds which are owned by the citizen and not by the mopeds which are given on rentals. It might happen that the accident could be caused due to the mistake of the pedestrian like they could have cross the road without checking for the traffic. Without knowing the exact reason why the accidents are caused, to conclude that they are caused by the rental moped would not be right.
Secondly, the letter claims that the neighbor island of Seaville was able to reduce the number of accidents by reducing the rental mopeds. It could be possible that the town council of Seaville could have provided some other mode of transportation which is cheaper than the moped, so that the citizen of Seaville island have stop the used of moped. Unless, the government of the Balmer island does not provide an other mode of transportation, it is difficult to say that the citizen of the island would shift from the used mopeds and the reduction in the accidents due to it could not reduce.
Thirdly, the letter claims that the government should only reduce the rentals of mopeds during the summer season. It could have happen that the accidents in the summer are less than the accidents that happen in other seasons. The letter has not provided any kind of proof that the number of accidents in the summer season are higher than any other season of the year. Unless, a proper data is not provided it would be wrong to assume that the number of accidents in the summer are highest.
In conclusion, if the town council of Balmer island also wants to reduce the moped accidents by 50 percent than it should first check the different reasons due to which the accidents are being caused and are these accidents caused due to rental mopeds or not. Just by copying the method which Seaville island and not analyzing the effect of this on the island would be illogical and not right to do so.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
Suggestion: reduced
...o moped, the number of rental should be reduce by half during the summer season. To ar...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... rental should be reduce by half during the summer season. To arrive at such a conclusion the let...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'stopped'.
Suggestion: stopped
...hat the citizen of Seaville island have stop the used of moped. Unless, the governme...
^^^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...t of the Balmer island does not provide an other mode of transportation, it is difficult...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...nly reduce the rentals of mopeds during the summer season. It could have happen that the accident...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...during the summer season. It could have happen that the accidents in the summer are le...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...f proof that the number of accidents in the summer season are higher than any other season of the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gher than any other season of the year. Unless, a proper data is not provided it would...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 469.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6012793177 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30042326732 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360341151386 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5628638023 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.941176471 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 6.88822355289 203% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290815409838 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11291160592 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845999257176 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192401964003 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621296376083 0.0628817314937 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.3550499002 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
Suggestion: reduced
...o moped, the number of rental should be reduce by half during the summer season. To ar...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... rental should be reduce by half during the summer season. To arrive at such a conclusion the let...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'stopped'.
Suggestion: stopped
...hat the citizen of Seaville island have stop the used of moped. Unless, the governme...
^^^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...t of the Balmer island does not provide an other mode of transportation, it is difficult...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...nly reduce the rentals of mopeds during the summer season. It could have happen that the accident...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
...during the summer season. It could have happen that the accidents in the summer are le...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...f proof that the number of accidents in the summer season are higher than any other season of the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gher than any other season of the year. Unless, a proper data is not provided it would...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 13.6137724551 162% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2260.96107784 95% => OK
No of words: 469.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6012793177 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30042326732 2.78398813304 83% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 204.123752495 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360341151386 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 705.55239521 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5628638023 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.941176471 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5882352941 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 6.88822355289 203% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290815409838 0.218282227539 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11291160592 0.0743258471296 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845999257176 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192401964003 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621296376083 0.0628817314937 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.3550499002 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.32208582834 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.