The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
From the passage,we see that the author is presenting a descriptive discussion about the usage of the mopeds in the treansportation in the Balmar island. The declination of the number of the accidents involving mopeds, the town council of island should limit the number of rentals.As a result, a reduction of 50 percent negative occurence can be demonstrated which is acheived by neighbouring city. The argument is mainly on the decision which should be taken in this purpose of the reduction in number of rentals of mopeds.
Firstly, the quantity does not matter at all if the citizen of the island take seriously to oblige the traffic rules as well as the drivers of these vehicles.If anybody is not resolute to obtain the knowledge of the disciplined system, it will be great difficult and pretentious to the authority to see a town with good manners. The awareness between the public is much more necessary to arise at the sitauation than lessen the motorcycles quantity. From this perspect, the pupil always have positive thinking and honor to the systematic prosperity in the communicartion facilities.But it will be more hard to maintain the system when this kind of irresponsibility defer us to get the main theme of setting regulations towards the people.
Secondly, the number of accidents is counting in what kind of standard. For example, when a buyer wants to sell his product in the market and promoting his things to say that it has a huge quality and measurement in numbers. But through a investigation we find that it is not expected quality the buyers need as to fullfil the market.So, a large amount is not always represent a good nature of any service.At the mean time, this should keep in our mind that sometimes protesting may not be helpful to gain the exact result . On the other hand, critically consider all the factors with respond to the problem, we can experience a furitful and powerful solution.
From the discussion,it is clear to us that the council decision was not so insturtive. Furthermore, different ages persons should take care about their own safety and protection.As a result, they can contribute to build up a disciplined and fantastic area for living human being.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 12 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1799 1500
No. of Different Words: 207 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.734 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.805 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 133 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.846 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
From the passage,we see that the author is presenting a des...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the mopeds in the treansportation in the Balmar island. The declination of th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...land should limit the number of rentals.As a result, a reduction of 50 percent neg...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...s well as the drivers of these vehicles.If anybody is not resolute to obtain the k...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'motorcycles'' or 'motorcycle's'?
Suggestion: motorcycles'; motorcycle's
...arise at the sitauation than lessen the motorcycles quantity. From this perspect, the pupil...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...perity in the communicartion facilities.But it will be more hard to maintain the sy...
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Line 4, column 237, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...and measurement in numbers. But through a investigation we find that it is not ex...
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Suggestion: So
...he buyers need as to fullfil the market.So, a large amount is not always represent...
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Suggestion: At
... represent a good nature of any service.At the mean time, this should keep in our ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... not be helpful to gain the exact result . On the other hand, critically consider ...
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... powerful solution. From the discussion,it is clear to us that the council decisio...
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...e about their own safety and protection.As a result, they can contribute to build ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, kind of, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 2260.96107784 81% => OK
No of words: 372.0 441.139720559 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94623655914 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98076066229 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0158953989 57.8364921388 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 119.503703932 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 23.324526521 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.70786347227 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720264346091 0.218282227539 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283824878814 0.0743258471296 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405198759297 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418522724392 0.128457276422 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497904171215 0.0628817314937 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.3799401198 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.32208582834 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 98.500998004 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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