Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and business,while others think they are negative.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Commercial advertisement plays crucial role in sale of any product.Few people assume that it isa positive for masses as well as for business,while others think it is negative.I,strongly agree with former notion as it is a time saving technique and it provides helpful information.
To begin with,advertisements are time saving trick.Masses can see pamphlet of any product by sitting at home and they can use their this time in other chores which led to make them perfect in work by saving time.Resultantly,one can become more productive.In addition to this,advertisement provides helpful information.When can easily get knowledge about the product ,available in their locality proven helpful for them.To illustrate,many of the businessman often went to abroad for purchasing different gadgets which are not affordable in their city.masses can get proper information of useful product .
However,some people counterclaim that advertisements are not trustworthy.they usually give extraordinary features to attract customers,which will not available in that product.Eventually,one can gain a loss after purchasing things just after viewing advertisement.Moreover,it leads to unnecessary shopping.As advertising companies gives discount on products ,people bought them under influence of the cutdown price which of them are not even used for many times.For instance,many companies give offer to gain height in one month after eating supplement product of their company which is not true but often attract customers.
To conclude,advertising of any product is a overview of the product.Although pamphlet are not trustworthy yet they provides useful information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96652719665 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.15490840921 2.80592935109 148% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619246861925 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.14291564 49.4020404114 419% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 356.5 106.682146367 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.75 20.7667163134 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.25 7.06120827912 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13712116434 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915008060026 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304160582074 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915008060026 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304160582074 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.6 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.79 50.2224549098 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.23 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.52 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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