The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010

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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

The information in regard to the ration of the british people giving money to donation by various age groups in specific given years.The data is celibrated in percentum.

Now,looking at the details,in 1990,the charity given by 18-25 age people was 17% which showed significant increase in donation by age of masses 26-35 and 36-50 with 31% and 43% respectively.Whereas in 2010,the charity value plummeted by 7% in age group of 18-25.Additionally,charity donate by age of 26-35 folks upsurge with 24% whilst 36-50 aged masses give donation of 35%.

Probing ahead,with remaining information,in 1990,there was a collapse in donation by age of 51-65 individuals ,which accounted total in 35% .In regard to this,this value plunged to 31%in 65 age group people.Noticeably,in 2010,the cost of donation by age 51-65 Masses inclined to 39% .Lastly,this cost again showed descending trend with 30% Donation by age of 65 .

Overall,it is patently obvious that charity was mostly given in 1990 by 36-50 age groups.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, whereas, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60208273087 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.3612581 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.0 112.824112599 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.75 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218366907788 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152441170714 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646635219084 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152441170714 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646635219084 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.2329268293 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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