Everyone wants to be as healthy as possible. Fortunately, in modern society there are many things that people can do to improve their physical condition. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
Get exercise on a regular basis
Eat healthy food every day
Visit a doctor for regular examinations
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people in the world are concern about how to stay healthy. There are many things a person can do to improve his or her health, such as exercising in a regular basis, eating healthy food, and visiting a doctor regularly. Personally, visit a doctor for a regular examination is the best way to improve the physical condition for everyone. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, I think that a lot of diseases are silent at their early stages. Silent diseases mean that they do not have symptoms to grab the attention of the patient to go and get the required treatment. Therefore, having a regular examination helps in discovering the illness at early stage, which make the cure possible. For example, when I was young, my grandmother was very healthy and active. She was in her eighties, but she had never used any medication. she ate healthy meals, that are full with fibers and vitamins, and she used to say a healthy meal helps her in increasing her age. Unfortunatly, she was wrong. Suddenly, she started to feel dizzy, fatigue, and she had a continous headache. We convinced her to go and get a chek up, and then the bad news were revealed, she was at the end stage of liver cancer. In fact, her doctor said that she only had couple of weeks to live. After she passed a way, her doctor told us that liver cancer is a treatable disease. He said that 95% of the cases recover if they have been diagnosed at the first stage of the disease.
Second, I think that doctors have the highest knowledge regarding the human's body ,health, and sickness. Moreover, they know the progression of any change in our bodies. If people want any information about their health, they are not going to visit a teacher or a plumer. In fact, their only choice will be their primary doctor. Having a regular doctor visit for examinations provides people with crucial information required to improve their physical condition. Back to my grandmother example, I believe that if she visited her doctor regularly, he would certainly tell her that she needs a regular visit, and a yeary check up. He also would help her to manage her meals according to her specific condition. I know that it is too late for her, but it is not for me. That is why I scheduled my next doctor visit.
To sum up, in my opinion visit a doctorfor regular examinations is the best way to stay healthy. It is not only because doctors know better about our bodies, but also there are many diseases that have no symptoms, and a regular visit will help in there diagnosis and treatment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hest knowledge regarding the humans body ,health, and sickness. Moreover, they kno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i feel, i think, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2134.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56959314775 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5283176744 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475374732334 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0138445903 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.037037037 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2962962963 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177164291771 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501175404319 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665836387457 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132782074873 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887688698973 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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