You are living in a University residence and you have a problem with a the high levels of noise. A new campus restaurant which is open late at night. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter
Complain about the situation
Say why this is a problem
And propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the noise coming from the campus restaurant that has just opened.
First, I would like to draw your attention to is the motor bike sound hearing at midnight. secondly, people always talk and laugh loudly, even though they are well aware that the campus is situated just infront of the canteen and even, yesterday quarrel occurred about the noise .
Because of their behavior and the noise they are making, we cannot focus on our education, as we tend to study at that particular time, which is midnight. Moreover, ,since our studies keep us busy and also we are staying in a university residence, it could be extremely frustrating sometimes to either get some sleep or keep our mind calm. Not only does it cause trouble for us, but also my neighbors are affected by this.
I,therefore, suggest that it would be great if signboards were put up in front of the canteen so that customers would keep that in mind. In addition, i believe that reducing the closing time is unconditionally helpful for the students. I hope you will appreciate that. This is a very worrying situation for us all.
Please address this issue as a matter of urgency.
Kind regards,
Kavitha mohan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...e motor bike sound hearing at midnight. secondly, people always talk and laugh loudly, e...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...sterday quarrel occurred about the noise . Because of their behavior and the no...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cular time, which is midnight. Moreover, ,since our studies keep us busy and also ...
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Line 6, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dence, it could be extremely frustrating sometimes to either get some sleep or ke...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , therefore
... my neighbors are affected by this. I,therefore, suggest that it would be great if sign...
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Line 8, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s would keep that in mind. In addition, i believe that reducing the closing time ...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as a matter of urgency. Kind regards, Kavitha mohan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86448598131 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66873004721 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696261682243 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4913346832 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.75 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146508193063 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451273373044 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350018071683 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752544499823 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337021920742 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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