Some people think it is more important for the government to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill.to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Health Plays an integral part in our lives.There are some people who assume that it is better to allocate money to stimulate a healthy lifestyle to decrease the level of health issues, Nevertheless,I would argue that government should spent a vast amount of money on the treatment of ill people.
There are variety of reasons why government should invest money to find either a cure or do the reatments for citizens who have been suffering from health issues.Firstly,it is wise to cure someone who has diseases unless if is not a cancer or other diseases, which have no cure , rather than promoting a healthy lifestyle. for instance, a girl who is my best friend, is on a diet and has been taking advices from health consultant in order to reduce weight . So, a person could be easily taking care of one's self.
Secondly, it is the government's responsibility to ensure every individuals are save because one's life is invaluable. Lives of citizens need to be prioritised more than anything else .Despite the fact that death can not be avoided ,people who could be cured of have difficulties to get a better treatment due the lack of money or even poverty can be safe if money is divided for this.
In conclusion, having a healthy lifestyle is more likely to result in good health. even though it is often argued that money is needed to alleviate the level of health from the beginning .I advocate that it is the best solution to divide funds for patients who suffer from illness .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72972972973 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73272047651 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.42667342 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.125 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236612816156 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912583363516 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587654584578 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144845227471 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344954761469 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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