Mrs Barrett, an English speaking women who lives in your home town,has advertised for someone to help her In her home for a few hours a day next summer.
Suggest how you could help her
Say why you would like to do this work
Explain when you will and will not be available.
Dear Mrs Barrett,
I am writing with regard to the domestic assistant you advertised in " sunday" of June 27th, 2023.
I hope, I could be of great assistance to you because, I have worked as a house helper for the past two years. In terms of works, I can do cooking laundry as well as ironing. Beside that , i have studied agriculture so I could also help with planting and water the plants if you need needed.
Actually, I have been planning to do a part time job somewhere in the town , which allows me to relax.Moreover , I am currently struggling with financial issues so I would hope that this job not only help me to earn money but also help me to gain some experience and I believe that will do my best.
In terms of availability, I am afraid that I cannot c9ne to your home on Mondays and Fridays due to the lack of time. But, I assure that I could on the rest of the days next summer . Other than that, I am responsible for getting my youngest sister off to school. So that, morning times specially from 7.30 to 8 am will not be possible.
I am looking forward to your reply st your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Baskaran thadshayini
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... laundry as well as ironing. Beside that , i have studied agriculture so I could a...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Actually, I have been planning to do a part time job somewhere in the town , which allow...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...do a part time job somewhere in the town , which allows me to relax.Moreover , I a...
^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... in the town , which allows me to relax.Moreover , I am currently struggling with financ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...town , which allows me to relax.Moreover , I am currently struggling with financia...
^^
Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erms of availability, I am afraid that I cannot c9ne to your home on Mondays and ...
^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ure that I could on the rest of the days next summer . Other than that, I am resp...
^^
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...uld on the rest of the days next summer . Other than that, I am responsible for g...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, Baskaran thadshayini
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, as well as, i am afraid, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68049273872 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7983272914 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222045232964 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717044858409 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373168066935 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797883046809 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496622722273 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.