Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
The prompt focuses on the role of government official as a most responsible person of a state. Government officials are not the employee of a particular government employed for a short period of time like an elected government as per constitution. Basically, they are known as the servant of the People’s Republic and serves until a certain period of time fixed by the constitution of the country. So, it may be expected that as an employee of the nation they will always keep in mind the benefit of the people of the country rather than the benefit of the government.
Some members of the government may have good intensions to work for the development of the country and some may have bad intensions to be self-benefitted in anyhow. A government official having the ethics and liability to the country should distinguish them by their judgment and should not comply with the bad one which is harmful for the country. In addition, the good initiative may be good for the present and in future its consequence may not bring any benefit. A qualified and experienced official can investigate it by his proper judgment and influence the government not to implement it for ensuring better future. So, personal judgment of a responsible person is necessary in case of shaping government ideas.
Government as a body has different types of members having different backgrounds. Generally, they are deputed to administer the wings or ministry of the country to whose activity they are not familiar with. Sometimes, it happens that a doctor elected as a member has been selected as a minister of disaster management. Since he has educated himself in the medical field and spent a majority time in that field, so it is common that during the time of policy making he may take his decision without thinking logically and reality. Besides, while making strategy and plan he or she may be influenced by the supporter of his party to provide them benefit ignoring the right and demand of the general public. The member of the government rely on the respective officials of his department before making policy and plan and ask for valuable opinion as an expert. The government employee as a part of the administration could verify the activity of the government body by using their intellectual capability to stop the issues at any stage of proposal, approval and implementation. This will influence the government members to choose appropriate decision and strengthen the economy of the country by avoiding the waste of money.
To reach a goal and to attain success following order is required. For example, in defense sector chain of command is mandatory and they have to follow the order of their superior rather than questioning and trying to implement their judgment. This is applicable for battle field because the consequence of disobeying an order may affect the sovereignty and victory. But, in real life accompany the illegal order may cause a great danger to the whole nation. So, judgment of official worker of the nation should be introduced at the time of need.
The general public is not directly involved in the official process but the government member and government officials have such role. A questioning attitude of the government official as a right keeper of public always makes alert to the replier that is representative of the government. So, applying judgment for the betterment of the people may be beneficial for the whole nation and to ensuring better future.
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development 83
- A nation should require all of its students to study under the same national curriculum 16
- Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 66
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate 33
- Governments officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ticular government employed for a short period of time like an elected government as per const...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e’s Republic and serves until a certain period of time fixed by the constitution of the countr...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...it ignoring the right and demand of the general public. The member of the government rely on t...
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Line 3, column 1129, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to appropriate'
Suggestion: to appropriate
...luence the government members to choose appropriate decision and strengthen the economy of ...
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Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...be introduced at the time of need. The general public is not directly involved in the officia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 39.0 12.9106741573 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2900.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 583.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97427101201 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89083624157 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433962264151 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 928.8 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.939953775 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.32 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.56 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264435043995 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751408144255 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609995218748 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159120688342 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443990722381 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.