Any kind of job is more secure for a business because in business the risk factor is high and sudden profit or loss occurs also funds are required to start a business so most people choose a job based on income for security for families. A group of individuals believes that only the highest salary is a necessary factor other than rather than other factors to Select any job. All the aspects would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs with valid reasons and appropriate examples.
Discussing the former question Some people believe that only a high salary is enough criteria to select a job. The main reason for believing this is that, High-income help to live a healthy life because people have financial freedom and they fulfill their desire and dreams. It was also possible to say that, a high standard of living generate happiness in their families so that the relationship between family member increases. One good illustration of this is, according to one survey, nearly 60% of low-income employees have financial stress to survive in a high-life style society, in contrast, to 85%. high wages employees their life without any burden.
However, according to people if people is happy while doing their job, money is a second priority compared to other factor. To begin with, first of all, people should select their job according to location and transport facilities so that people Spent less time traveling and spent less money spent on it, also they spent more time with their families Another factor is people are comfortable with company environment and their colleges so they perform best and enjoy their work, that way they never feel stress. And last but not least, people choose their job according to time and Career growth. A particularly good example here is, the world's largest company Google, it provides a friendly environment for their employee and also decorates their office according to their choice so they feel comfortable cond work with full efficiency.
In conclusion, Some people believe that people decide on their job according to
the salary for wealthy life and achieve their dream. whereas other factors
provide more happiness and enjoy their Select work. In my opinion, people
should select a job according to Various job factors which play an important
role in a person's life: also it has long-term benefit.
- Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job What other factors should be considered 73
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The given graph shows the past and the projected figures of the government spending as a percentage of GDP for the years 2000 to 2025 in three areas 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: High
...ife style society, in contrast, to 85%. high wages employees their life without any ...
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Suggestion:
...they spent more time with their families Another factor is people are comfortable...
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Suggestion: worlds the largest
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Suggestion: Whereas
...r wealthy life and achieve their dream. whereas other factors provide more happiness ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...tors which play an important role in a persons life: also it has long-term benefit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0358974359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4879195304 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517948717949 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8685078109 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.933333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414037767457 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151940786858 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876031389179 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191691707815 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958692075487 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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