n this day and age, it is consequently sad to say that there are numerous animal species extinct due to the fact of many affections of people or natural disasters. While some people believe that we don’t have any reason to protect animal’s life, it is my firm belief that we should try to prevent animals endangered.
First and foremost, animals seem to be the primary source of food for human life. In Vietnam, for instance, a large amount of pork is consumed to make food per day. Besides that, there are more and more types of animals that are used to provide food for people every day. Therefore, it seems sensible that protecting the animals’ life can ensure the essential ingredients for us to live.
In addition, a plethora of different animal species are playing a number of important roles in becoming a part of the ecosystem. For example, in the forest of Australia, there are so many kinds of creatures living with trees, flowers, etc., that help balance the ecosystem. Thus, saving animal species which have the ability to extinct will make our life more diverse and not become unbalanced.
In summary, preventing animals which are endangered is extremely vital to the human soul due to the fact that they are playing a number of essential roles in providing ingredients and balancing the ecosystem. If they are extinct, we will be threatened owing to the fact that of the lack of a significant part of the world.
- The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban rural and town between 1995 and 2010
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- In some countries today many people decide to have their first child when they are older What are the reasons Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 pounds sterling 67
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
n this day and age, it is consequently sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78714859438 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59752131502 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546184738956 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.515565206 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6363636364 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229458798084 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850063553514 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051885297169 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136949388842 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722379794832 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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