The chart graph manifests a collation of the statistics for humid deforestation in two periods 15 years. The circle graph clarifies the motives of muggy tree cutting between 2000 and 2005.
In two interval time that, the hectare of woodlands in South America demolished was increased dramatically ( from less 4000 thousand to over 4000 thousand). And Asia was risen, too (from 2500 thousand to under 3000 thousand). By constrast with Asia and South Ameriac the havoc jungle ratio waned. The number of vanished woodlands in Africa was declined steadily (from over 3500 thousand to 3500 thousand). The proportiondemolished jungles in Central America, Oceania, North America were the mostdiminutive. In two terms, they were under 500 thousand.
The hectare of forests which were wrecked between 1900-2000, was utilized in during 2000 and 2005. Some farmers required approaching 15%-20% for small-scale agriculture. And some ranchers demanded about 15%-20% for large-scale cultivation such as rice,oil,etc. 40% that zone was exerted for pasture. About 5%-8% was reformed to logging. And 3% was used for other schemes.
To sum up, the ratio of havoc woodlands and causes of them per year in each tract was divergent.
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The diagram shows the process of making recycled paper from old newspaper Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and makes comparison where relevant 78
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste 56
- The bar graph shows a comparison of the figures for tropical deforestation for the year 1990 and 2000 The pie chart indicates the causes of tropical deforestation during the period from 2000 to 2005 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ca demolished was increased dramatically from less 4000 thousand to over 4000 tho...
^^
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds in Africa was declined steadily from over 3500 thousand to 3500 thousand. The...
^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , oil
...for large-scale cultivation such as rice,oil,etc. 40% that zone was exerted for past...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33507853403 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92093110006 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0862725926 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9333333333 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184759514172 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617536670641 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652536143697 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124949327963 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953070719522 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ca demolished was increased dramatically from less 4000 thousand to over 4000 tho...
^^
Line 2, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds in Africa was declined steadily from over 3500 thousand to 3500 thousand. The...
^^
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , oil
...for large-scale cultivation such as rice,oil,etc. 40% that zone was exerted for past...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33507853403 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92093110006 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0862725926 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9333333333 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7333333333 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184759514172 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617536670641 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652536143697 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124949327963 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953070719522 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.