some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe to go straight into work and get experience instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In precent times, there is an argument about achieving a certificate from university is the optimal means to secure a good job. However, other people presume that going straight into work and learning experience is better way instead. In my perspective, I strongly agree with graduating university is the best way to get a good job.
On the one hand, college degree is crucial key to almost people nowaday. In the present era, studying university gradually occupies indispensable role in people perception. Therefore, college diploma is the essential requisite in almost jobs. Moreover, there are many labors that employees compulsorily own academic knowledge from university. For example, whoever works as a doctor are obligatorily possessed a certificate.
On the other hand, learning studying is not the only method to get the great job. There are various sample examples about sucessful businesses who did not go campus. The ground for this is that they have innate potentials or colleting skills from different employments. Moreover, sometimes experience is even more important than degree. Since degree is used for demonstrating amount of academic knowledge from campus. Then, experience verifies the ability of utilizing those knowledge. Notwithstanding, knowledge also achieve via working job.
In my opinion, university hold vital role in people life. This brings a prepared time and fundamental knowledge to you before having any occupations.
In conclusion, both above opinions have its advantages. However, I absolutely advocate with getting a diploma from university instead of going straight into work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...t going straight into work and learning experience is better way instead. In my perspectiv...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to study'.
Suggestion: to study
...ficate. On the other hand, learning studying is not the only method to get the great...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...ience verifies the ability of utilizing those knowledge. Notwithstanding, knowledge also achiev...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity instead of going straight into work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5951417004 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01506649565 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6227580013 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7368421053 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369458937842 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937647432705 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927363522376 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200085810552 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125086775034 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.31 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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