Some people think children's spending time on TV, video and PC games is good, while others think it. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
While it may be dislike by lot of people, tv shows and games are something that became a part of world since the 80s and nowadays it is something that is watched and
play billions of people around the world daily. But certain parents believe that pc games and television can impact children negetively.
In my opinion I completely agree with this statement as I believe that games and tv shows in today's society can create lot of
negative influence on children. So today I like to delve into the positive and negative consequences of games and series and also give my opinion about them.
First of all, there are certain advantages of children playing games and watching television.
These allows them to temporarly relief from the stresses and responsibilities put
forward to them by today's morden world.They are also really effective in improving their motor thinking and teamwork skill which is something that can really come in handy especially when
playing sports like football, basketball and so on.
However, nowadays lot of games and videos have violent contents in them
that can create various fears in children which unltimately leads to development of certain phobias that are long lasting.
In my opinion I believe that videos and pc games have more negative effect and positive.
It makes them spend more time inside their home playing games than going outside and spending more time with their family and friends.
Also it could lead to illness like depression and anxiety which can have devastating effect on the metal wellbeing of children. It also makes them disconnected
from reality and makes them much more interested in fantasy world that it offers.
In conclusion, even though Television and games are important it have their own negative as well as positive effect. However it varies from how individuals and how they use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1067961165 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5785103163 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.452986038 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207357083379 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756365385122 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586134900346 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675874321656 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566768006905 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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