The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles

In the following stage fermented product in separated to 2 phrases: liquid and solid products. Then liquid product is purified. After liquating ethanol is purifying for 5 hours. Over the course of 8th stage purified ethanol is stored. The final step involves carrying the ready products to special tracks and transporting them to customers

The pictorial diagram illustrates how wasted glass bottles are recycled an. Overall, there are 3 huge stages and 11 distinct procedures in the linear process, commencing with collecting wasted glass bottles and culminating with sales ready products for to customers.

The initial phrases of this pictorial diagram all happen with collecting wasted glass bottles. At the first stage in the process these bottles are brought into collection point. After transporting it in order to recycle again, the second main stage is started with washing bottles with high-pressure water. In the next step all bottles are separated brown, green and clean ones. Afterwards, they are delivered to a glass factory.

After the stages of delivering, pieces glass are placed into furnace with a funnel-like opening which the temperature soared up to 600-800 degrees Celsius. Before product is shaped in glass mold, they are separated into recycled and new liquid glass. The following stage is ready product are transported into supermarkets in order to sail consumers.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...racks and transporting them to customers The pictorial diagram illustrates how wa...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'an'?
...s how wasted glass bottles are recycled an. Overall, there are 3 huge stages and 11...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41743119266 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70437257187 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7083507857 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3571428571 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237471067714 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787927169931 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711443410784 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160679068973 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113078827262 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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