The given map illustrates the differences in the layout of the educational 1.facilities in 2004 and this one predicted until the 4th year of the 20th century.
Overall, the site of the school 2.will witness radical changes with the most striking being the new facilities t and the increase in 3.the number of student capacity.
In 2004, there was a road leading us to the car park which was to the left-hand of the main entrance, 4.and it extended up to a bend, which faced the first large forest in the east.In addition, 6.there was a pathway situated between two school buildings and 5.lead us to the sport field, 7.directly opposite with the main entrance
This school will be extended and have the ability to accommodate 1000 students.. Besides, school building 3 is predicted to replace the sport field,8.which will be relocated near the remaining forest in the bottom. The road will remain unchanged but 9.the bend will be eliminated. Instead, it will lead to a second car park positioned to the east of the school buiding 3. 10. Another significant change is that the pathway 11. will no longer lead us to the main entrance; 12.rather, it will guide us towards the new school buiding.
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- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of student capacity. In 2004, there was a road leading us to the car p...
^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...aced the first large forest in the east.In addition, 6.there was a pathway situate...
^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay situated between two school buildings and 5.lead us to the sport field, 7.dire...
^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...directly opposite with the main entrance This school will be extended and have th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...the ability to accommodate 1000 students.. Besides, school building 3 is predicted...
^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill be eliminated. Instead, it will lead to a second car park positioned to the e...
^^
Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...nificant change is that the pathway 11. will no longer lead us to the main entrance;...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84951456311 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65516230926 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.793382152 43.030603864 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157710634468 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725042206786 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496598501183 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957309263143 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580559898889 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... number of student capacity. In 2004, there was a road leading us to the car p...
^^
Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...aced the first large forest in the east.In addition, 6.there was a pathway situate...
^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay situated between two school buildings and 5.lead us to the sport field, 7.dire...
^^
Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...directly opposite with the main entrance This school will be extended and have th...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...the ability to accommodate 1000 students.. Besides, school building 3 is predicted...
^^
Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill be eliminated. Instead, it will lead to a second car park positioned to the e...
^^
Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...nificant change is that the pathway 11. will no longer lead us to the main entrance;...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84951456311 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65516230926 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 108.793382152 43.030603864 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.875 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157710634468 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725042206786 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496598501183 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957309263143 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580559898889 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.