Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
explain what has happened
describe the bag and its contents
say what you would like them to do about this problem
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ravi Mehra. I writing this letter to seek your assistance on my hand bag. Last week, When I was travelling with your airlines, I forgot my bag in cabin compartment during get off. The flight number id EK456 and seat number E45.
Unfortunately, flight was landed 1 hour late expect of usual time, and I was in hurry for my business meeting. So, I only collected my laptop bag while my personal bag was in other cabin compartment. Therefore, due to urgency, I totally forgot my personal bag in plane.
Moreover, The bag is in blue colour with white strips which also have my cloths, many books, and my personal belongings inside. It would be in the cabin number E56, I remember the number because I was exactly seating front of the bag compartment.
However, if you please look carefully inside that compartment, you will find the bag there. When you find the bag, please contact me on my email abc@gmail.com. In addition, I am staying nearest hotel from Airport which is Sheridon hotel.
Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Ravi Mehra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...Sir or Madam, My name is Ravi Mehra. I writing this letter to seek your assist...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...also have my cloths, many books, and my personal belongings inside. It would be in the cabin number...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'staying the nearest'.
Suggestion: staying the nearest
... email abc@gmail.com. In addition, I am staying nearest hotel from Airport which is Sheridon ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63618675455 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6809507997 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4285714286 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281051664673 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100830514593 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07927669692 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154211698158 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732668017955 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.