The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned
future development of the site.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant
The two illustrations show us the production site of a town called Norbiton now and the changing layout in the future. This area will definitely become more modern and busier.
Currently the area is located in the east of the town with the river flowing from west to east in the north, the north is farmland. In the middle, there is a roundabout with two exits, one of which connects to the main road to the south and the other to the east, and several factories are scattered on both sides and around the roundabout to the east.
In the future, two new exits will be added to the roundabout. One to the northwest and the other to the north , there will be houses built around those two routes , and the way to the north will pass through a newly added bridge to allow us to access the new housing estate, besides only the farmland in the northeast. On the main road, a small roundabout will be built at the intersection with the large roundabout. Factories will be replaced with housing and facilities such as shops and medical centers around the large roundabout. A school will be built on the east side with a new park nearby.
Overall, this production area will be completely converted into a residential area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the northwest and the other to the north , there will be houses built around those...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... be houses built around those two routes , and the way to the north will pass thro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56164383562 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49994983672 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488584474886 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3067648074 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0662018421774 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034718802356 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408249469833 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634747621838 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451712397905 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.