In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages ?
The ageing of populations is a global phenomenon that has significant effects for society and government. This problem has its own disadvantages and advantages but I believe that the benefits of having older population outweigh the negative effects.
On the one hand, there are some challenges that arise from having an ageing population. One of the main challenges is the increased demand for health care and social services, which puts pressure on the public budget and the workforce. Moreover, the ageing population may also reduce the labor supply and the economic productivity, as more people retire and fewer people enter the workforce. This may lead to lower economic growth and higher taxes for the working population
On the other hand, there are also some benefits that come from having an ageing population. One of the main benefits is the abundance of knowledge and expertise that older people have. Their life experiences over several decades have a wealth of information that offers priceless perspectives to future generations. The elderly can act as mentors, imparting historical viewpoints, customs, and cultural practices. Furthermore, elder people can become guardian for their grandchildren in families whose parents are occupied with their work. This can increase family bond among family members and the kids can be supported both physical and mental health while their parents are away..
In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of having ageing population surpass the disadvantages, as older people can bring more benefits than costs to society and government. It is crucial to acknowledge that elderly people must be valued for their contributions to society's wealth of experience and wisdom, not as liabilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42647058824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88831166785 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9441412657 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31915041234 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115635177685 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803682275876 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201066573455 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605866170774 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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