Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
While some people insist it is mandatory for professionals to serve for the nation where they received traning programs, others contend that individuals should feel free to work in any other countries wherever they want. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this controversial issue before going on to the state why I tend to agree with the need for them to have the right to choose their country of occupation.
On the one hand, working in a country that provided such programs is professionals’ obligation because the nation supported with their education using its all resources in the forms of funding students loans, training equipment and so on. To be more specific, a nation generously provides universities with high technology, knowlegdeable instructors, food and other associated requirements. Without this policy, many skilled workers may move to another country which offers a higher living standards and the country that trained them will suffer a problem called “brain dain”. Therefore, once all of these supports have been made available for the students to grow comprehensively, it is time for the educated individuals to give back to the nation and use their knowledge to futher its development.
On the other hand, i strongly believe that it is more beneficial for highly qualified people to be unrestricted in their choice of employment location. The main reason they want to emigrate is the lack of adequate opportunities in their own country. Without addressing this issue, it is not fair to stop them from moving overseas. For instance, a doctor trained in India might receive a significantly higher salary and access to better medical facilities if employed in the USA. Futhermore, the movements of practitioners across borders will definately foster the exchange of knowledge and ideas, it is also a chance for them to network with professionals of different backgrounds. In 2020, the rapid distribution of COVID-19 vaccines were made posible by international collaboration among scientists, pharamceutical companies, and governments, highlighting the critical need for experts to work across borders to solve global health crises and protect the well-being of people worldwide.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that freedom of choosing work place beyond of geographical boundary should be warranted for all professionals for the futher development of science and technology and better human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...on supported with their education using its all resources in the forms of funding s...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to work'
Suggestion: to work
...it seems to me that freedom of choosing work place beyond of geographical boundary s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36269430052 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11059534129 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.14049064 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.230769231 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6923076923 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287761426637 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911154842596 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849124810885 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167972176872 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610825835228 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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