Research has observed that teenager’s screen time has grew, while the time they spend on physical and creative activities is less. This problem is caused by a lot of factors, and I believe it could be addressed by several viable solutions.
There are some reasons why children today tend to watch television overly and spend less time on active and creative things. The first reason is that many parents are too busy to spend a lot of time looking after their children. As a result, it forms a habit for both parents and children that every time they are engaged, they let their children watch television so their children will gradually have a habit that is difficult to break. Another reason is that today many schools only have one or two lessons a week for physical activities. For that reason, the majority of teenagers are lazy to exercise or to participate in other activities because they are used to using technology devices and not doing exercise frequently.
There are two main solutions for a decline of the children’s screen time and encouraging children to do more physical and creative activities. First of all, parents should change their lifetime, spend more quality time hanging out and playing sports or brain development games with their children on the weekend. This is a great opportunity to help them stay away from watching television and make them more interested in other activities. Besides, every school should increase the number of physical lessons to three to four lessons or add exercise in between break times. By increasing the physical education class, children will be more physically active, less likely to be lazy and, importantly, avoid using mobile devices. Moreover, it is also possible to create a habit of exercise for them.
In conclusion, parents’ attention for their children and schools with few physical lessons are two big reason for increasing children’s sreen time. Parents and school are two important factors to encourage children to do more physical and creative activities.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...bserved that teenager’s screen time has grew, while the time they spend on physical ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to three to four lessons or add exercise in between break times. By increasing th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66893717849 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501492537313 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3815195838 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291156693422 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112548930329 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969380300294 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188906211584 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709846318171 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...bserved that teenager’s screen time has grew, while the time they spend on physical ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to three to four lessons or add exercise in between break times. By increasing th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66893717849 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501492537313 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3815195838 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291156693422 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112548930329 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969380300294 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188906211584 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709846318171 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.