Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons and provide some solutions?
It is a fact that children are watching more television than they used to and spending less time doing active and creative activities. There are main contributors to this noticeable problem such as addictive programs and parents' carelessness and several measures are suggested to put an end to the situation.
There are major factors leading to the issue of children's excessive amount of time spent watching television. The first primary reason is that television programs are broadcast all day with addictive contents, such as vivid and colourful animation. For example, programs like Disney Channel can easily draw attention from children with their all-day-long series of animation. Another clear reason is that parents are always busy at work so they let their children watch television, an activity that does not require much attention. These two main reasons make children spend more time in front of the television screen, thus preventing them from taking part in active or creative things.
A number of possible steps can be taken to tackle this important issue. The first solution is to limit the amount of time a child can watch television. This could be done by activating downtime mode and setting a fixed time limit on the television. Another feasible solution to this matter is that parents should spend more time with their children and participate in outdoor or creative activities together. For example, a small sports competition among family members can prove appealing to children than television.
In conclusion, addictive programs and parents' ignorance are the main reasons for children watching more television and spending less time on active and creative activities. However, there are measures that can be taken to deal with the problems regarding watching time limitations and family participation in outdoor activities.
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| 2023-07-26 | Ng Minh Chau | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, regarding, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3676975945 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76534741927 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2228370025 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34266331291 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133467430682 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120995831015 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238460807678 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392053581372 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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