Many people argue that it is better to work in a job that pays well, but it is not fulfilling, while other believe that pursuing that align with one's passion is more important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
There is a conflict among people about selecting their profession. One group believe that is best to go for the occupation that pays well, whereas another group agrees to stick to the passion. I have discussed both the views and have given opinion at the end.
Taking into account the views of former, going for a well paid job helps to earn a better lifestyle. If a folk is earning more than average, then he will be able to enjoy various luxurious like foriegn trips, better house, vehicle, and so on. Even more, high salary will become a way to fight against inflation. In recent period, it is noticeable that the prices for even basic things like vegetable, fruits, cloths, and so on is increasing day by day. So, if one is not earning well, then it will be hard to cope up with daily expenses. Hence, making more wealth not only help to live a great life, but also help to meet up basic needs.
Considering the opnions of later, following the passion will always open the door for creativity. For example, if an individual who is interested in music choose music as his levlihood, then he will be able to enjoy it and will also be able to create novel tones and music. Therefore, interest gives life to creativity.
In my opinion, engaging oneself in what one like is great as it allows to live stress free life. Psychology says that if there is large difference in what one is doing and what he wanted to do, then the level of stress experienced by the person is higher. So, following one's dream gives a happy and relaxed life.
To conclude, pursuing one's passion promotes better mental well-being and innovation.
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also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62886597938 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41553135932 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8527475231 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200470637736 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670757666974 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543945713251 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121174167149 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694269195864 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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