Nowadays, people often argue that, technological advancements like internet has made libraries, unfavourable. I agree that, widespread internet made our work easier than ever before. While, I believe that, libraries existence is still necessary for multitude of options.
On the one hand, people in modern world, have adopted the internet services due to its reliability and efficiency. Thanks to the service providers, enabling to access desirable content. Moreover, It enables continuous access to information, regardless of time and location. That is to say, people around the globe can easily approach knowledge without any blockages. Thus, you may get all information from the comfort of your home with just a mouse click. For instance, students today, has a great benefit of internet which provides a variety of sources to find abundant information for their studies. Such as, samples or facts to help them with their school tasks.
On the other hand, notwithstanding internet's merits. Libraries have been influencing people for centuries. They were the primary source of information. Not everything on the internet has to be true. Moreover, there are some websites which are harmful to the users confidential details. Meanwhile, existence of libraries benefits are not disclosed properly. Along with internet, atheneum's provide a valid information, which are published by established publications around the globe. Visiting libraries can enhance your knowledge. Furthermore, it is a place where there are amenities for peaceful information gaining. To illustrate, my brother often goes to library whenever, he feels distracted by the noise and advertisements on internet during exams.
To conclude, it is irrefutable that internet is the most easy and reliable service to access information, However, I also believe that libraries are remarkable for pupils due to the distractions caused in today's modern society.
- Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things What is your opinion 84
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Because of traffic and housing problems in the cities the government encourages businesses to move to the rural area Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- When choosing a job the salary is the most important consideration To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6323024055 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05861229554 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.799217734 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0476190476 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254916453683 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627920656853 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042990936967 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146669178027 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272436055125 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.