Nowadays, sports are vitally important to pupils in all aspects of their life. There are multitude of sports activities like, football, gymnastics, etc., which not only provides physical fitness but also teaches the proper discipline to the children. Some kids are being mostly involved in sports activities while, others, play sports in their leisure time regardless of their physical and mental fitness. I believe that, both the scenarios are equally important due to various reasons.
Engaging in sports activities for kids enhances their power of concentration and their physical and mental fitness. This type of involvement can create a healthy lifestyle from their childhood and maintains their distance from harmful habits like smoking and drinking. Furthermore, sports keep children equipped all the time and keep toddlers from wasting time over computer games and watching television which are detrimental to their well-being. These activities have made a severe change in the academics, the pressure from the school can be tiring for young people and sports divert their attentions and leads to relaxation and enjoyment.
However, it is irrefutable that sports are elemental in children's life, taking sports seriously and making it a career goal can be beneficial to the children in every aspect. Participating in sports for pupils can develop various valuable life skills such as teamwork, competing nature, leadership and more. Children who are invested in the sports activities tend to enhance their potential of working hard and this can be applied to other fields such as academics. For instance, Virat Kohli who took an early interest in cricket when he was 8 years old. He then became world's number one batsmen for four consective years. This show that sports also have more career opportunities.
In conclusion, the trend of taking sports seriously and playing in free time, both brings positive effect. Sports should be valued same as academics as they are crucial in children's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37341772152 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66349688766 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7721372565 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349092095139 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118507118871 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889563957649 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230149691375 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458905544271 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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