People's behaviour is largely determined by forces not of their own making
Behaviour is one of the important aspects which determines the nature, discipline, credibility, etc of a person. Behaviour depends on factors like frustration, depression, financial crisis or workload in office. Behaving properly not only helps in making surrounding milieu happy, prosperous and lively. Behaving rudely will for sure impact one's career, friendship, life and many more factors. Others try to stay away from such person and might criticize for his/her behaviour. So, it is most important to behaving realistically in calm way.
Behaving intractable also affects the life of not only ours but also of others. For example, President of Ukraine is stubborn on his conditions for peace talk that he is unwilling to give up his land at any expense to Russian Federation. Obviously it theirs land but being at the war not only affected normal citizens daily and peaceful life. Some even lost their parents, some homes, and some loved ones. This kind of nature of behaving not acceptable for future of country. Eventually, it will cost country billions of dollars for reconstruction and will swept at least 20 to 30 years behind than other developing countries.
Behaving properly like Tata family one of the richest family in India is considered as best because their spend their 65% of earnings to charity owned by Tata Trusts. This kind of behaviour is not determined by force but by owns will. Eventually the family wants to help each and every person in the India happy. This kind of behaviour helped tata family not only to make friends but to create a friendly environment between competitors too.
It does not mean that a person need to always keep silent in wrong conditions but need to think practically and its adverse effects of peoples. Like George Floyd, who was killed by the police inspector of USA due to no reason. Floyd family not only lost the bread earner of the family but also the father of child. In this situation the family need to stand out and other citizens should always help the people who faces such discrimination in their daily life.
By considering all the examples stated above it totally depends on the situation where to behave in forced way or according to own will. But it should consider all the aspects which will be affected due to such irresponsible behaviour.
- Unfortunately in contemporary society creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind the image 75
- Main benefit of the history is to dispel illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times 66
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition 58
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities 83
- Government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y. Behaving rudely will for sure impact ones career, friendship, life and many more ...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'sweep'
Suggestion: sweep
... of dollars for reconstruction and will swept at least 20 to 30 years behind than oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, at least, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94102564103 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65761407235 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1862156728 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.5909090909 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22727272727 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197450123886 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553719405834 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801949441177 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104908794791 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696058983876 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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