In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Besides the development of technology, and social media, there are many ways for people to access information and knowledge such as searching on Google, watching videos on youtube, etc. An asseveration that the ability to read anything online for free will mean that nobody will buy physical newspapers or books in the future. In my case, I strongly disagree with this statement and the following paragraph will explain my viewpoint.
First of all, some occupations such as writer, editor, journalist, playwright, and some publishing companies earn money from producing books, newspapers, magazines, etc. If people move to read online without paying, they can not sell books and newspapers and earn money from these. Consequently, their ideas and efforts can be wasted, leading to a corollary in the decline of employees in that profession. For instance, some authors earn income from selling their books and sometimes sell them on the Internet at a lower price. Likewise, some publishing companies can be bankrupt because of no profit.
In addition, the information on the internet is abundant and difficult to censor. People can access the source of false information and thereby adversely affect the perception and understanding of people. Since the age of using social media and the internet is diverse from children to the elderly, it may not be possible to distinguish the right information. In particular, a child can become riotous by learning from terrorists on the internet and it is complicated to re-educated that child. Moreover, practicing the habit of reading books every day will positively change the perception and personality of each person.
Apart from that reading books and newspapers can reach people from different areas and ages. In fact, people who live in the countryside or mountain lack material conditions, and electronics so they can not use the Internet or technology. Additionally, the information and knowledge conveyed through books and newspapers will be more convenient for the elderly and children.
In conclusion, reading online or buying printed books and newspapers have many pros and cons in this century. However, using printed books and newspapers can reach many types of people in different situations. Hence, everyone should keep the habit of reading printed books and newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40326975477 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90123823374 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534059945504 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3595534622 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.368421053 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230073886439 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741538427783 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716304719112 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137179966051 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624102557866 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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