Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
After finishing some students wonder whether they should keep studying or not. Some people suppose that applying to university or college is the most effective way to have a successful career, nevertheless, it is believed that getting a job straight after school is better.
There are huge advantages to continuing a study path. First of all, studying at a university or college assists the young to have a clear learning pathway. Therefore, they are educated the endure and pursue the last goal. With a bachelor's degree, students will have more opportunities in some jobs that require high-quality workers, especially in such a competitive job market as today. Besides, through a learning process, the adolescents who decide the future of a country are provided with the background knowledge about general economy-society, which plays an indispensable role in life. Last but not least, the high number of students applying to university or college brings about a learning spirit for families and society. Take a family for instance. If the oldest of the family passes a high-ranked university, this is a good example for her younger to follow. By extension, this created a new generation that has a higher academic level in the future.
On the other hand, getting a job straight after school also brings numerous benefits. Participation in the labor market from the age of 18 instead of 22 (after graduating from the university) synonymous with that the young have more dedicated time to the society. During 4 years, instead of learning lessons in theory, joining in a labor force helps them broaden their mind, gain precious experiences that college students lack of. Morover, they have more time experiencing varieties of different fields, figure out their strength. As a result, they are motivated in the work and pulled forward, which make their promotion easier. After settling down, they may have a family and afford their expenses - independent individual finance.
In conclusion, studying at university or college or getting a job, both of them have their own benefits. It depends on personal orientation and the goal of the whole society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g pathway. Therefore, they are educated the endure and pursue the last goal. With a bachel...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17528735632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87107732953 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.730893844 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265477412959 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760686559236 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117260085739 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201192660925 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133391868459 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...g pathway. Therefore, they are educated the endure and pursue the last goal. With a bachel...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17528735632 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87107732953 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.730893844 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265477412959 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760686559236 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117260085739 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201192660925 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133391868459 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.