The two line charts manifest the alteration in the right of possession of electrical apparatuses and number of time taken to do household chores in one nation over a period of 99 years.
The first graph gives information in relation to percentage electrical devices in each household. In 1920, the percentage utilization of refrigerator was 0%, which surged to over 50% and 90% in 1940 and 1960 respectively. In the year of 1980, it had a steady increase by 10% and leveled off 100% throughout the next years. The percentage using vacuum cleaner and washing mechine had a minuscule difference ( 30% and 40% for each), which augmented by 10% in 1940 and rose to the similar level (at 70%) after 20 years. Following that years, they had contrasting trends. The utilization of vacuum cleaner grew to 90% and 100% in 1980 and 2000 respestively and unchanging in next years, while the using of washing mechanic slightly fell in1980 ( under 70%) and steadily increased in following years ( roughly 70% between 2000 and 2019).
The second chart provides data about amount of time to do housework weely.In 1920, it was a half, which decreased graually in 1940 and 1960 (over 30% amd 20% respectively). It flattened out over 10% from 1980 to 2000 and had a slight decline to one in ten in 2019.
Overall, the percentage of electrical gadgets in households were increasing whereas amout of time weeky to do housework was falling.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shing mechine had a minuscule difference 30% and 40% for each, which augmented by...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of washing mechanic slightly fell in1980 under 70% and steadily increased in foll...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd steadily increased in following years roughly 70% between 2000 and 2019. The ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ut amount of time to do housework weely.In 1920, it was a half, which decreased gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347107438 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76823730266 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3336095232 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159951086931 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661461918845 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597616775404 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1230684278 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420976931943 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shing mechine had a minuscule difference 30% and 40% for each, which augmented by...
^^
Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of washing mechanic slightly fell in1980 under 70% and steadily increased in foll...
^^
Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd steadily increased in following years roughly 70% between 2000 and 2019. The ...
^^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ut amount of time to do housework weely.In 1920, it was a half, which decreased gr...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8347107438 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76823730266 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3336095232 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159951086931 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661461918845 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597616775404 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1230684278 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420976931943 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.