In today's fast-paced world, the question of childcare responsibility when both parents work has become a matter of debate. While some argue that grandparents make excellent caregivers, I assert that childcare centers should be the preferred choice.
On one hand, advocates for grandparents caring for their grandchildren cite financial benefits and loving care within a family context. Undoubtedly, raising children substantially increases living expenses. Entrusting their children to grandparents can alleviate the financial burden of paying for childcare services. Moreover, family members often have a deep emotional bond with their grandchildren, ensuring dedicated and affectionate childcare. This provides parents with peace of mind, knowing their children are receiving nurturing care within the family.
On the other hand, I advocate for childcare centers because of their professionalism and the well-being of grandparents. Childcare professionals are well-trained and experienced in caring for children of various ages. They possess the expertise to ensure children's well-being and promote their holistic development. For example, childcare centers offer a variety of activities, including games, arts, and physical exercises, which contribute to children's cognitive, mental, and physical growth. In contrast, expecting grandparents, who have already dedicated their lives to work and raising their own children, to assume full-time childcare responsibilities can be stressful. Such a role may lead to a rapid decline in their health and overall well-being, which is not an ideal outcome for our elders in their golden years.
In conclusion, while I respect the idea of grandparents caring for children, I firmly believe that childcare centers represent the optimal choice. These centers offer professional care, ensuring comprehensive child development, and provide elderly family members the opportunity to enjoy their retirement years without the added stress of full-time childcare responsibilities. This balanced approach ensures the well-being of both children and grandparents, allowing parents to pursue their careers with confidence.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11513157895 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23287994288 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9187769807 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338560624187 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112524672749 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475487166986 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214813004106 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375717167791 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.22 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11513157895 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23287994288 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588815789474 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9187769807 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338560624187 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112524672749 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475487166986 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214813004106 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375717167791 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.22 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.